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My Little Brother by ~Heathey:iconHeathey:



"Do as I say,
Yet not as I do"
But, don't you see
He aspires to be you

Talk is cheap
But actions teach
Just what direction
He should reach

His mind is brilliant
Though his thoughts are young
His dreams stay still, yet
His will is so strong

I admire him
for the person he'll become
I'll inspire him
To strive to be someone

He will be strong
In mind, body, and soul
Just keep moving on
I'll take the toll

He possesses everything
that I lack
I'll help with anything
he may slack



You don't need to thank me
Only Promise me
That you will be
As much as you can be
©2008-2009 ~Heathey
:iconheathey:

Author's Comments

This isn't one of my best poems. But I wrote it more for the message then the flow and rhyme.

Dedicated to my little brother, Shane Lewis.

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:iconatomiccloud:
wonderful message and meaning =]

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:iconatomiccloud:
also I like ur opening

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"I'm just a realistic impression of artistic expression"
:iconheathey:
=) thanks

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:iconjosie-mouse:
Thats so awsome. I feel just like that with my younger brother.
I really love it :heart:

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When I woke up this morning I realised that I wasn't going to gain full consiouness till lunch time


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:iconheathey:
Thanks soooo much :hug:

And thanks fav too :heart:

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I have a photographic memory...i just forget to develop it...or upload it...w/e

Check out my blog: [link]
:iconjosie-mouse:
hey no worries. Anytime :hug:

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There was Chaos and Calamity before there were cookies

When I woke up this morning I realised that I wasn't going to gain full consiouness till lunch time


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